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Rephrased

Many of the standards were rephrased, for diverse reasons. This example is overly verbose and refers to ``[t]he level of incident'' which is not defined anywhere else in the document.

(76) ``Where incidents that could threaten the integrity of the system occur, those responsible for operating the equipment shall immediately inform the competent electoral authorities, who will take the necessary steps to mitigate the effects of the incident. The level of incident which shall be reported shall be specified in advance by the electoral authorities.''

We rephrased it as follows:

20) 5. ``Incident levels shall be defined and appropriate responses identified.''



margaret 2006-05-25